Vision - Didn't know what it meant... but it is well defined and all so I put 5.
Originality - When I saw this I instantly saw starfox in there and in DA you always see that drawing of fox and such.
Technique - It is really nice and all but I would not consider this FULLY professional work.
Impact - When I saw the picture in newest I instantly clicked on it, there was no other choice. Also I really like the concept and you should go foward with your game project if what you said was the real deal.
In the end, I think that hte only big yhing you can see that is'nt that good is how the shield is attatch to the arm.
Thanks azure this is actually my very first time receiving a Critique Notice. I agree with you on the shield attachment (do you think I should make it into a round shield instead?). And as for the game idea, I'm really hoping I get to make this into an actual game but I'm still missing some experience and the right software to make it so as of now I'm putting this on my "TO DO" list for the future, right next to my DRAKIA idea and my K9 idea.